Natalie And Abbie: A Narrative Fiction

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“Wait the killer is…”Phoenix started to say.
-A few hour Earlier-
It all started out as a regular Halloween but instead of going Trick-Or-Treating with my family I was going to hang out with my friends, Phoenix, Natalie, and Abbie, we were probably walk around a little to get some candy, but I didn’t Know.So as I walked out, I waved my family goodbye.I brought my skateboard just in case we were going to walk around and get candy.I didn’t want to be anything, but I decided if I wanted to get candy I was going to have to dress up, so I just wore some jeans, a black T-shirt, some vans I use for skating, and a black pullover jacket.
I got on my board and started skating down the road to meet my friends at the park.I text Pheonix,”u @ the park yet”
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It was a……
BEAR
We all screamed and ran for the entrance of the cave, but on the way out Abbie tripped over a rock and fell and was attacked by the bear.We all kept running and running until we came up to an old abandoned house and we went in to hide.
But what we didn’t know was that the house was a haunted house and the ghost the haunted the house was going to haunt whoever came into the house that is why it was abandoned.
We started to block the door with everything that we could move from small books to the fridge and dining table.When we were done, we sat on the floor and tried to catch our breath when we started to see the small books and lamps to start flying around.Then, they began to get thrown at us, and we heard someone say, “Get out!!!We don’t want you here!!”
We all got scared and ran upstairs and hide in one of the bedrooms.I spoke and said, “Why were the books and lamps flying around and crashing into the wall?And, what was that voice that said ‘get out we don’t want you here’ and who is “we.”
‘I don't know, but it scared me bad.”Phoenix said.
“Yeah,” said Nat.
“Should we call the cops?”I asked pulling out my
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We didn’t feel like staying so we started to walk off when Phoenix said:”Well who could have wanted to kill us all and how could they have known we would all be together?”
“I don’t know, but we should go find out.”So we went back into the house but through the back door instead and started to look in all of the doors to see if we could see any sight of who the killer might be.As we went through the doors they were all empty, but as we were about to open the last door we heard a sound from upstairs, so I opened the door that was a closet and looked at it and saw a bat, so I grabbed it and went upstairs.As I reached the top I turned around stopped to listen, and I heard footsteps in the far room, so I started to walk to the room and opened the door quickly and got ready to swing.I saw Micheal walking around trying to get all of his equipment for all of the electrical things to make the house seem haunted.Also with a bear suit on a bed.I raised the bat, and he ran at me with a knife and knocked me to the floor, and the bat flew loose, and he was about to kill me, but I said, “Why are you trying to kill us?” trying to buy time to move over to the

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