At first I only had a few sentences that explained why I chose to write about my cat being stolen. This made it seem like the essay had no underlying meaning or lesson to be learned from it. To reverse this I added several sentences such as, “A middle schooler stealing my cat on Thanksgiving taught me a valuable lesson in empathy and understanding. Putting myself in the catnapper’s shoes showed me the flaws in my unwillingness to admit I was wrong.” to further show why this event was important to me. These details really tied my story together and revealed my purpose for writing about this
At first I only had a few sentences that explained why I chose to write about my cat being stolen. This made it seem like the essay had no underlying meaning or lesson to be learned from it. To reverse this I added several sentences such as, “A middle schooler stealing my cat on Thanksgiving taught me a valuable lesson in empathy and understanding. Putting myself in the catnapper’s shoes showed me the flaws in my unwillingness to admit I was wrong.” to further show why this event was important to me. These details really tied my story together and revealed my purpose for writing about this