Personal Narrative Essay: The Cure

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The Cure Wincing from the rays of the sun beating down on me, I awoke to my father yelling from the downstairs kitchen. “Come quickly or you’re going to be late to school.” I flew down the stairs of our modest Californian home with great rapidity. Looking at the breakfast that my father had prepared, I saw a picture of my mother and my insides began to swirl around. My mother had died when I was five in a battle with breast cancer. Every year My Dad and I make a big breakfast in order to commemorate her and her love for breakfast. Now five years later we are still keeping the tradition alive. As I finished my breakfast, my father forced me playfully out the door to the school bus. While I was on the bus I thought about how much I missed …show more content…
“How’s he doing?” My father asked
“Well, I will have to run a few tests to see whether or not he still has some the same skills he had before.” Said Dr. Gallagher After my father had left the room Dr. Gallagher began running his tests. He gave me fifth grade level material to see if my knowledge had dropped. Once he started reading me off questions I could feel my brain firing on all cylinders. It was as if my brain was a formula racecar, and I was racing through each question with flying colors. Dr. Gallagher looked astounded by my new-found ability to process information. He then decided to test my IQ. I finished the test, and Dr. Gallagher looked at me in awe then back at the sheet of paper.
“Tom your IQ is off the charts you scored a 190 that’s thirty points higher than Einstein!” Exclaimed Dr. Gallagher. I was at a loss of words; I had gone from a below average fifth grader to one of the smartest people to ever walk the face of the earth. Outside I could hear Dr. Gallagher talking to my father about my new-found ability.
“Mr. Hawkins, your son is a savant.” Gallagher whispered
“What the hell is that!” My father said
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I accepted immediately, and thanked Dr. Gallagher for helping me train in using my skill. My training is complete. I now know how many lives I can save. Mom was right I can finally change the world for the better.
Once I arrived I was assisted by some of the best medical minds in the world. I quickly came up with a solution to cancer and was ready to test it on a subject. We injected the patient with the serum and all was going as planned the cancerous cells were exiting. Then out of nowhere the patient went into to cardiac arrest. I was in a panic I haven’t experienced failure since 5th grade. I locked up and the patient didn’t make it. The next few months I pondered on those horrible moments. I then decided to go analyze the data from the test subject. I found that I had used the wrong dosage. I did it, I found the cure for cancer. I then headed home to my dad back in California. He bent down to his knees and began to cry. I had finally done

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