Personal Narrative Essay: Old Burnt Mill Road

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How many of us really ever heath our parents warning as teenagers? We were always warned to stay off old burnt mill road therefore, we never truly took it seriously. The question was always ask how come we should not go out there the answer was always (best if you just did not find out). Of course like all teenagers we thought sure what do they know that we don’t, we had the typical thinking the world was ours we had the world by the balls we know everything, what could go wrong! A little bit about old burnt mill road that was told to us the short story goes late 1800s father got possessed by demons, in summary, Was forced to kill his whole family and that’s the short version.
As other memories fade to become less important, Old Burnt Mill Road will always be being ingrained in our minds like a piping hot cattle prod on a USDA choice cut of meat. This is long before we both decided to join the service him Marines and the army were for me. All accounts of what happened on those deployments this one still stick out like a sharp needle that just won’t quit sticking you in the back. But the both of us still remember it like it was yesterday, October 28, 2005, Friday night both of us were dressed up like zombies long
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The wait did not take much longer he did succeed on making something that is not explainable happen. The phone rang scared both party’s in the car we were asked when we will be arriving to the party. It was at that moment in the left window a set of crimson eyes blinked from the back of this old cabin. Were our eyes playing tricks there it was once more moving closer to the window. Once eye contact was made there was no turning away it was as ones very life force was being drained out. Could still heir what was going on just could not move. They say the eyes were the window to the soul well on that night it felt like it was being ripped

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