The ocean stretched in an endless horizon; it was the most spectacular sight, while the first tear drop allowed the rest to create a stream. With tears rushing down my face, I could not do anything but sit across the crawling waves drenching the sand. I reached out for the golden sand and sifted a handful of small worthless stones through the gaps of each finger. The droplets of salty water stung my wounds in my bloody barefoot, as the waves slithered its way up. The pain was numbed by the exhaustion, acting as my anesthesia. Beyond those soothing waves were golden streaks that filled the canvas of the sky. The pink and orange beams of light merged together, resembling a flawless ripened peach. The luminous face of the blazing celestial fireball
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I awakened early as usual from the dream and went on my morning jog routine to start my day. Every time I jog in the morning, I am able to avoid the anxiety in my dream and clear off my mind. Jogging in the park especially opens up opportunities to see various scenes and allows me to open my mind to a new perspective. The slight breeze rustled the branches and caused the dead leaves to fall on the ground, one by one. To catch my breath, I walked around the green and blue tinted pond, and the milky white ducks quacked and battled for scraps of bread thrown at them. Someone on the other side of the pond caught my eye because the outline of the figure was familiar. He walked vigorously with his chest out, a tall redheaded man who had scars on his arms. He then turned around and our eyes met. The face I would never forget. I felt sick in my stomach and had a rotten taste in my …show more content…
The first paragraph is the continuation of the book and in this paragraph, it used different kinds of imagery to determine a subject. For example, instead of declaring “the sun is…” the narrative states: “Beyond those soothing waves were golden streaks that filled the canvas of the sky. The pink and orange beams of light merged together, resembling a flawless ripened peach. The luminous face of the blazing celestial fireball in the sky was mirrored by the clear azure sea as the rays blended the shades of blue.” Describing the sun specifically by not telling it is a sun but showing will allow the audience to picture the actual image of the sun. After the first paragraph, the notation of “Ten years later” was added because to clearly state what time period the narrative is starting. The second paragraph determines the flashback of Ralph when he was on the island. The dreams he encounters is the fatal death of Simon and this also uses imagery because it precisely explains about how Simon died. Most part of the narrative includes imagery, even when Ralph meets Jack. There were dialogues between Ralph and Jack because to build up the tension among themselves to lead Ralph’s savagery. In the end, Ralph’s savagery of him killing Jack leads this story into a plot twist because in the “Lord of the Flies” Ralph shows little savagery in
I awakened early as usual from the dream and went on my morning jog routine to start my day. Every time I jog in the morning, I am able to avoid the anxiety in my dream and clear off my mind. Jogging in the park especially opens up opportunities to see various scenes and allows me to open my mind to a new perspective. The slight breeze rustled the branches and caused the dead leaves to fall on the ground, one by one. To catch my breath, I walked around the green and blue tinted pond, and the milky white ducks quacked and battled for scraps of bread thrown at them. Someone on the other side of the pond caught my eye because the outline of the figure was familiar. He walked vigorously with his chest out, a tall redheaded man who had scars on his arms. He then turned around and our eyes met. The face I would never forget. I felt sick in my stomach and had a rotten taste in my …show more content…
The first paragraph is the continuation of the book and in this paragraph, it used different kinds of imagery to determine a subject. For example, instead of declaring “the sun is…” the narrative states: “Beyond those soothing waves were golden streaks that filled the canvas of the sky. The pink and orange beams of light merged together, resembling a flawless ripened peach. The luminous face of the blazing celestial fireball in the sky was mirrored by the clear azure sea as the rays blended the shades of blue.” Describing the sun specifically by not telling it is a sun but showing will allow the audience to picture the actual image of the sun. After the first paragraph, the notation of “Ten years later” was added because to clearly state what time period the narrative is starting. The second paragraph determines the flashback of Ralph when he was on the island. The dreams he encounters is the fatal death of Simon and this also uses imagery because it precisely explains about how Simon died. Most part of the narrative includes imagery, even when Ralph meets Jack. There were dialogues between Ralph and Jack because to build up the tension among themselves to lead Ralph’s savagery. In the end, Ralph’s savagery of him killing Jack leads this story into a plot twist because in the “Lord of the Flies” Ralph shows little savagery in