Personal Narrative Essay: Casualty At Apple River Canyon

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Casualty At Apple River Canyon

2011 August, 17 Apple River Canyon it was my cousin's first communion after party We were swimming in the creek and the water was extremely cold I got out for a while. when I was going to jump in I chose to jump in a different area passing a bridge. I yelled “Come over here the water is warm”. We were there for a while, we realized the water started moving. We started swimming out grabbing each others hair hesitating to get out. we started running through the gravel like millions of needles in my feet We started looking around trying to see if everyone got out. we thought we were all out but one of my cousins Jullian was missing. We start looking everywhere but we couldn't find him. We were still searching

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