Personal Narrative Essay: Bob Bloodson's Murder

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It was going to be a long and hard investigation for Bob, as the body of the Bloodson’s family cook, Raz Mataz, laid in front of him inside the kitchen of the Hauntside Mansion.
“It looks like we have an investigation on our hands,” mentioned Bob.
Billy Bob was a retired police detective for the Huantside Police Department. As he was offered 1 million dollars from the Huantside Government to investigate this case, Bob had a weird feeling. A feeling that was sensing fear in that this murder was not the typical murder murder; it was a murder done by something other than a person.
“I think you are write about this one” added Joe.
Joe was a small, dark man who had a british descent. Joe was one of Bob’s most closest friend and detective for the
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“And what about you, Mr. Dean,” he added.
“I was doing my usual check to make sure everything was in order before the butler came in, and I found something unusual laying in my room. I found a 4 inch needle with a container attached to it, laying on the floor behind the chair. I thought that that was rather odd to find a needle in my bedroom, as they are usually in the kitchen”.
“Well thank you, and now let’s finally move to what the Butler has to say,” added Bob.
“Well when Mr. Dean was done checking the house, he called me to come down and perform my daily cleaning of the mansion, and I agreed. When I got there I saw Mr. Dean leaving and the cook’s car in the driveway. As I went inside, Raz Mitaz welcomed me in. I said hello and I’m hear to clean the mansion. The cook just looked at me and just went back to doing what he normally did: preparing the next day’s meal.”
“Was there anything else?” Joe asked.
“Yes, when I went inside I saw the needle in the trashcan, a knife in the kitchen, and bloody footprints. That is all sir.” Bob ignored the evidence of the knife and asked,
“Where are those footprints you suggest you found?”
“They are in the back of the mansion leading to the backdoor,” replied the

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