Kali,
Just took a look at your paper, everything looked fine. Very well written, nothing grammatically stood out to me. Everything flowed well, and the construction seemed well thought out. The only thing I would recommend is, look over the paper and make sure that the points you are making line up with the way they are said. That meaning if you are talking about Christianity, make sure you put the emphasis on what it has done for you, not what you can do for the faith. Make a point to express that you understand that this is not a duty driven faith, rather it is a faith you live out because you love it. That is the only thing I recommend, it is a very well written essay, very well done.
Hope this helps,
Love,
Josiah
Just took a look at your paper, everything looked fine. Very well written, nothing grammatically stood out to me. Everything flowed well, and the construction seemed well thought out. The only thing I would recommend is, look over the paper and make sure that the points you are making line up with the way they are said. That meaning if you are talking about Christianity, make sure you put the emphasis on what it has done for you, not what you can do for the faith. Make a point to express that you understand that this is not a duty driven faith, rather it is a faith you live out because you love it. That is the only thing I recommend, it is a very well written essay, very well done.
Hope this helps,
Love,
Josiah