Personal Narrative: Divided

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Have you ever been so scarred that you cried? Well it all happened a few years ago but I still remember it like it was yesterday.

It was 11:00 pm. and I woke up to the sound of coughing coming from my brothers room and it wasn’t just coughing it was non stop coughing. I was scared. I ran into my brothers room and I saw him choking on air he couldn’t breath. I was crying and I was screaming for my mom to help my throat was starting to ache. My mom called 911 it took 3 or 4 minutes for them to get here but they gave him some medicine and he felt better for a while we got to the hospital and we sat in the waiting room he started coughing again as soon as they called him up to see the doctor. They gave him a loud sounding big brown machine

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