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I was in Math when I was thinking how in the world did I get this... I got B that never happens! Hi I’m Noah, they call me Mr goody-goody because I never get bad grades. I’m in college and got it all.Except for the B I just got in math so it’s when I’m walking back to my dorm I see Ethan “Yo bro what’s up” Ethan called
“I just got a B in math so I’m bummed what did you get?” I Asked
“B+” He replied
“Dang it, well anyways what are you doing out here when your dorm is over way there?”
“Well I came to ask you if you wanted to to the water park with me on Friday?”
“Dude, it’s almost Christmas but okay” I didn't want to talk very much cause I was tired so
I went home and went to sleep. It was Friday, so I had to go with him.
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There wasn’t anything special about that airport that I know of,or was that man supposed to be there for some reason?Oh well, I thought I got to worry about a test.It’s near Christmas time and I’m in an Uber to get to my parents who lived not too far from my college and I see the same man, but in a different car that looked like I had just been won from a raffle and he turned into the airport.Then, once again he didn’t stop, but he put his hand out the window and it looked like he dropped something and he got back on the highway.
It’s the December 22,2017 and I was able to borrow my dad’s car and went to the airport and went to the part where I thought he had dropped something and whatever was here was gone, but I found a black mask just laying there and it had raffle tickets inside it and they all had the same number of them! I quickly drove out of the airport and went to the indoor waterpark where the repair crew was working and saw the hat that the tickets had been pulled and looked at some tickets, they all had the same numbers that one of the tickets had in the black mask.Then I hear footsteps behind
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“Hi’” he answered,”Can I help you?”
“Hey I found Troy Johnsen, I’m sending you coordinates of the hideout and bring the police.”
When they arrived it was too late they had already been gone for a while although I don’t know how they left.The police searched the whole area for secret exits and found nothing but tools I took a look closely at these tools and messed a round with some of them but one tool wouldn’t move as if it was super glued and then it finally turned and the floor moved revealing a trap door “Hey guys,found something.” I said showing them what I had found then one by one they started going down the trapdoor. Shortly after we were very far we start hearing voices up ahead.
“They’ll never find us in here boss!” one talked loudly
“I Troy Johnson know that they will eventually know that they will find us.” he proclaimed
“Freeze put your hands in the air!” a police officer yelled and they were red handed.A day later Troy Johnson was in jail along with his crew. Plus, for helping out I got to keep the car from the water park.When I go to get a job I need to consider being an

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