Personal Narrative: Boy Detective

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Boy Detective

“Time to go to school kids” Mom said.
“Okay” Fred and Kiley answered.
Fred and Kiley both got ready for school. Then they arrived at school. ”I'm going to go to the bathroom” said Kiley hopping around.
Then Kiley puts her phone down and goes to the bathroom while Fred go and gets his pencil from his locker. Then one of the bullies came by and saw the phone on the desk. He check to see if anyone was there, an no one was there so he took the phone. Kiley came back 10 minutes later and found her phone missing”ahhhhhh”Kiley screamed.
“Where is my phone?”
Fred came running into the classroom and found Kiley in tears. “What happen?” said Fred.
Kiley answered”someone took my phone” “I’ll help get it back” said Fred.
“You will” said Kiley.
…show more content…
Here are the suspects, Jonny, Lenny, and Carl. Johnny is wearing jeans and a black t-shirt and has green paint on his hands and fingers. Lenny is wearing jean shorts and a red and blue long sleeve t-shirt with black paint on his hands and fingers. Carl is wearing a grey Under Armour shirt and Under Armour shorts and he wears glasses.
“Lets check the crime scene” said Fred.
At the crime scenes they founded green paint and black paint on the desk. ”Johnny has green paint on his fingers and Lenny also has black paint on his fingers.
“Here is another clue¨ said Fred
“There is a piece of yellow, wool string on the desk and I now who is wearing a yellow wool sweater” said

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