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It was a long day after he had left the house. My dad told us that he would be gone for a while, but he promised he will be back. I had just completed my second grade year and it was the start of my summer vacation. After a couple of months since he left, we had decided to move to Corydon from Brownsburg. We decided to move because most of our family lived there. After we had settled down in Corydon it felt like time had gone by very quickly. My third grade year was at Saint Joseph, the school I graduated sixth grade from. During my fourth grade year my dad was supposed to come home.The two long years had finally progressed on and I had been counting the days down by the hour. During the week after thanksgiving break, I knew that my dad was

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