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Her father and I were those crazy and stupid teens. We had been dating for about three years. He had dropped out of high school. He was gone a lot for Magcon.

I was visiting one weekend. All the crazy fans screamed when they saw me. One night her father and I were...lets just say very happy to see each other. Dillon Rupp my best friend was the first to know everything.

Three months past. Taylor and I were still together, I think and hoped. I was gaining weight. Taylor was always away. Dillon helped me through everything. I only had about three more months left of school. I decided to finish my last year of high school.

My family was very supportive throughout the whole pregnancy. My mother told me that I was NOT going to terminate her first

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