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was 3 years old and lived at 1345 Burlington Terrace
Des Moines, IA 50314 and has most 3 year old I was very gullible. unfortunately I had a bad case of gullible ism, because one day everything went from normal, to me getting rushed to the hospital.

A long time ago, on ordinary day, my big brother Jacob

was trying to getting me to ride my tricycle down a gargantuas hill, ( Note: example of me getting influenced by my brother, just like how a mouse gets attracted to a piece of cheese not knowing it was walking into a mouse trap. ) It didn’t take much convincing to make me ride my tricycle down the

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