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When I was young and dumb, I had gotten into a fight my freshman year. I was so frustrated with myself and so disappointed. I was better than this. This isn’t who I was as a person. From this experience I have matured, grown up, and realised who I am suppose to be.
I never planned on getting into a fight at all my whole life. Walking into freshman year I planned on getting good grades and never ditching. I had goals for my life. I made the wrong choice in friends one day. It was in my math class and I didn't know a single person. I met these 3 girls who became good friends. These girls were the start to my life going down hill. I ditched so many classes and would hang with these guys who were horrible druggies. I met this one dude who I thought was treating me so well. I was wrong. I heard rumors that these 2 girls wanted to
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I thought I was a good person and even though I wasn’t making the best choices in guys or friends or even school in that matter. The day of my fight, I went to the lake during lunch because that is where all my friends would go. I heard some high pitched voices all yelling my name and I had turned around to see the 2 girls who wanted to fight me running down this hill at me. Before I realised it the little one comes at me and i pop her in the mouth and she runs off. Then the bigger one and I go at it for a bit and then I push her and ask what we were even fighting about. She called me some names and I had just walked off. The whole crowd left and so did the 2 girls. I had a little scratch on my face under my eye that my friend tried to cover up with makeup. I was terrified on the thought of my parents finding out what just happened. As I walked back up the school, Clark was standing there. I had someone fill out a report for me because my hand was swollen from the fight. I explained what happen and then got a ticket and got suspended. I went to court and I saw so many

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