Personal Narrative Analysis

Improved Essays
I grew up in a family of six girls in a two-parent home. During my early years of adolescence my family was very closely linked and extremely family-orientated. It was not until I turned the age of ten that all that changed. The family that was once extremely close was no longer anymore. The reason for such debacle was because of the passing of my late mother. No one noticed, but at that time my mother held the key to my family. My mother’s presence was the sole reason why my family members and siblings were so close during my young age. My mother’s passing came at a shock, there was no preparation, no warning signs, and there was no evident cause. My mother’s death came at a rush and brought on a storm of calamity with it. Once my mother passed, it was now my father’s responsibility to take care of six girls in one house alone. My father tried his very best to do all those things while still coping with the lost of his beloved wife and working as a full time job. As time continued, although I was still very young, I quickly realized that it was time for me to learn how to take care of myself. My father knew that he had a lot on his plate, as a result he made it his mission to ensure that he raised six daughters to be extremely self-sufficient, independent, and hard working African women. …show more content…
Although my child may be extremely young, I do not personally see any con with her learning how to come up with basic decisions on her own. I find it actually exciting and exhilarating to see, that at such a young age, Chrysanthemum is able to use all of her cognitions and thought process to make decisions, whether those decisions are right or

Related Documents

  • Decent Essays

    A.I believe the most challenging aspect of working in protective services would be not letting your career consume you physically and mentally. Knowing that there's such a great need out there and you're not always able to help when you want to,would be the most challenging aspect to me . You wouldn't think that it affects you, but it does. The emotional strain of the job and the desire to want to help everyone can be overwhelming.…

    • 349 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The door slams. Angry voices pervade throughout the house. Fear, fear of what was to happen next lingered in my mind. It became a part of my daily routine. At a very young age I realised that life was not all sunshine and rainbows.…

    • 501 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Technology has developed so much over the years that we have relied on it so much. Technology is used in pretty much everything we use nowadays. Living in a neighborhood was the greatest advantage, but having kids the same age as I was even better. There was never a time we weren't outside: rain, shine, snow, miserably cold, or even scorchingly hot. There was 4 of us: 3 girls and 1 guy, all around the same age.…

    • 765 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    On the sixth of May, in nineteen ninety eight, there was a major change in my family. That change was a baby named Tyler. I haven’t been around for very long, but I have witnessed many things. In my 17 years, I have witnessed the fall of the twin towers, the election of the first African American president, Bin Laden captured, and many other things. I have learned that family comes first and that you should enjoy every moment with them, because everything can change in the blink of an eye.…

    • 312 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    As a daughter of an african emigrant, life was quite different culturally and academically. Although my mother was still around my father played a more major role in my life due to her working a lot. The expectations that were required of me began around the age of seven years old. The way my father taught me to be the best had so much pain to the process.…

    • 605 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    On a snowy Christmas day at Sunrise Peak, there is a whiteout at the acme; snow is falling heavily, visibility is low, and the wind is unforgiving as it clashes against my bare face. I slowly start my descent down the mountain. As I begin to cut back and forth in a comfortable manner on my board I slip up. I try to turn to follow the slopes path, but I turned too sharply. The front of my board digs into the snow abruptly and causes me to plunge forward.…

    • 875 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    I had been dreaming about this day constantly for four years. All of my blood, sweat, and tears had gone into this one particular goal. On September 24, 2015, I had finally achieved my goal in successfully verbally committing to a division one college. Through motivation, determination, and hard work, I achieved my goal head on, even though many obstacles were thrown my path. My journey began in seventh grade.…

    • 741 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    For as long as I can remember, as a child I was raised to believe that a man should be the king of his castle. When I was five years old, that statement became a fable to me. I felt the Judas kiss the day my dad left. His reign has ended as king of his castle. He relinquished his crown and abandoned his kingdom.…

    • 1003 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The food became a burden to even look at. I began smelling unfamiliar aromas. I felt like I lost my control and I couldn’t resist from eating it. Once we got through security, I could feel the warm air of the summer day embracing me.…

    • 539 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    As a little girl I remember being raised in a household with my father, mother and two younger brothers. I noticed a drastic change in the dynamic of my family when my father passed away when I was about 12 years old. My mother then had to raise my brothers and me as a single parent. After my father had passed away I found there had been many problems that began to arise in my family. My brothers started misbehaving in school and there grades began to decline.…

    • 1197 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    A week into Fall, and the temperature was still lulling at 90 degrees, like the mosquitos that swayed comfortably above the bayou that ran for miles outside my English II class. The bayou would eventually diverge by my neighborhood. In class, the philosophical discussion on the Power of One by Bryce Courtenay also diverged. If Peekay could reach compos mentis (full command of one’s mind) after years of training, epitomized by a drunken bar fight, when would we ambitious students scrawled across plastic chairs and creaking wooden tables, reach compos mentis? Was it in adulthood, after college, or after the birth of our first child?…

    • 647 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    When I wrote this essay I was in my new home, my door room. I often refer to my dorm as my house, which my friends despise but I do it anyways. I always say “Want to come over to my house?”. Writing this essay in my new house allowed me to reflect back to my old house in Rotterdam. The physical setting that I was in made me feel extremely nostalgic for my old room at home that I shared with my little sister.…

    • 491 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    For the first time I confronted fear of death was when I was thirteen years old. I was a middle school student in Korea back then. After eating lunch, my classmates and I were getting ready for the next class. The bell rang, and a teacher was coming into the classroom. When I unconsciously looked at front, I saw my friend cutting herself.…

    • 347 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Language and its deceitfulness has warped my mind into a permanent shape of complexity. It’s paradoxical craft allows it to connect people, but at the same time it acts as an agent of estrangement. Migrating from the small city of Vallecorsa, Frosinone in Italy to the opportunistic, enigmatic realm of America, I envisioned my 13 year-old Nonno (grandfather in Italian) arriving at Ellis Island, and immediately being overwhelmed by a scene of confusion as he watches the flapping lips of immigration officers failing to communicate with him. Nonno followed his instincts to Boston, where he miraculously settled down and shared his language and story with his new creation of an American family. Years later, when I contort my mouth in peculiar ways attempting to speak this unfamiliar language, I fail miserably and he chuckles.…

    • 643 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    This article is, in my opinion, an example of how personal narrative can sometime confuse the author’s purpose. In order to frame her arguments she discussed her experiences with her family, and specifically how she was born a twin to a stillborn sister. She explains her families lack of coping and how her family effected her life, but I failed to focus on the overarching idea that she wanted to get out because of how distracting the stories from her personal life are. Instead found myself thinking that her story was strangely personal without much justification for why it was this way. While the point of her article, the balance between truth and respect, was somewhat present overall, the sections of personal narrative that she decided to include muddled it.…

    • 702 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays