Personal Narrative Analysis

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Chapter one
Y/n:Loren I have some news to tell you
Loren:What
y/n: well my mom has just been offered a new job in Arizona
Loren: WHAT?! you just turned 15 and we didn't even get to celebrate
Y/n: I know I've tried everything know to man to convince my mom out of it but every reason she has is better
Loren: well don't tell me that you are leaving tomorrow or I will loose it
Y/n: Actuallyyyyy...
Loren: Nooooo Summer just started I don't know what I'll do with out you....
***skip to tomorrow morning***
Mom: y/n wake up we have to be in the airport in less than a hour
Y/n: I'll be right down mom
*** YOUR POV***
Since you're going on a ten hour flight you decide to wear some adidas track pants and a comfy crop top. After you're done changing

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