Personal Narrative Analysis

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Growing up in life, I haven’t always chose to do the right thing. Some of those actions led to consequences that made me feel that nothing is fair. I wish I could go back and do things differently. Although I have made mistakes, I still feel that I deserve to have some freedom in my life.
I haven’t been the best daughter to my parents, but I feel that they should give me a chance to make my wrongs right. It all started when I started going to private school. I learned about all kinds of bad things that I knew I shouldn’t do. I became interested in it anyway. It led to me liking this boy named, Taylor. He wasn’t the best looking boy, but he was chocolate and muscular. From then, and still to this day, I have been liking the same boy. We couldn’t see each other outside of school, so we snuck around school to have alone time. In that alone time we ended up doing sexual stuff we shouldn’t have done. We got caught a few times, and almost got expelled from school. I felt so bad for my behavior, felt like I should get to do more, and this would have
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Eventually I did, but I still wasn’t allowed to see Taylor like I wanted to, besides at school. We began sneaking around more. We would tell our parents we were going out with our friends, and would really being meeting up with each other. After a while we never got caught, but we felt bad for using our friends. Our behavior got worst, and one day I decided to sneak him over to my house while my parents were at work. We got away with this for a long time, until one day my neighbor came over to my house one night. He asked to speak to my dad, and at that point I knew we were in trouble, so I called Taylor panicking. My dad came back in and told me and my mom what he said. His voice was so loud all I could do was stand there, and shake. I was scared to death and didn’t know what was going to happen to

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