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First I worked out logistics, a strict, 3 month, custom rehabilitation plan for Willow guided by opinions of the veterinarians she had worked with and specialists in the area. Second: How to gain the trust of one the most feared ride at the barn. So, I decided to take a more personalized approach; a few days of treat-giving and getting to know each other. Finally, it was time to hop on… My trust exercises had paid off. After that first day, I determined that we were meant to be a team. The next 3 months were incredibly brutal to say the least; I went from jumping 3’6 courses and taking champion at every show, to walking in circles, two different directions for an hour after school, five days a week.
Fast forward. Willow and I still remain

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