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Not to long ago, while my mother was gone at school for the night, i was in charge of my siblings due to me being the eldest. Usual routine as i had expected took a steep dive after i had barely put my little brother to sleep after numerous attempts to get him off the xbox and into bed. as i had finally decided he was out like a light it was around 11 at night and i heard screaming and gargled crying. Being as jumpy as i was running off little sleep i went to my room where my sisters slept and found my littlest sister stiff but twitching and being only 14 i still knew she was having a seizure so i had rushed to my room to get some pillows and wake up my little brother. Now even though i was 14 i still knew a lot about medical emergencies due

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