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The walls that hold me together were caving in all around me as I found out that Netflix had logged me out, and they completely crumbled when I realized I couldn’t remember the password. The air seemed to turn colder as I frantically walked over to the phone to find out the password from my dad. My bad day has come to the point that I have become so upset about forgetting my Netflix password. My day at school started like any other day. Terrific but today was special, it also was one of the worst days of my life. After I tripped and fell in science and then lost my pencil, pen, notebook, markers, homework, binder, backpack. I asked my teacher for a new homework assignment.
He said “ I don't have any more copies, so ask a friend.” I don't have that many friends and the ones I have aren't in my hall so that won't work. I decided not to do it and get a late grade. The combination to my locker is another thing that Ihad forgotten from this
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I really have to get back to work i have to get this presentation ready, so goodbye." I was really disappointed and getting worried. So I decided to ask my step-mom to see if she knew it.
" No I am really sorry, but I don't,” she said. I told her “ It was okay,” even though I was really disappointed and the warm phone was slipping through my hands and it fell with a big bang on to the floor. I was becoming terribly frightened that I was not going to get to watch my favorite show, Grey's Anatomy. The room became very cold and I think I almost blacked out. All I did was lie on the fluffy, soft couch, until my little brother got home. When the door slammed shut when he got home, I ambushed him with questions as he backed up into the corner of the room. I asked him if he knew the password in several different ways . All he said was "maybe." Then I got down on my knees and begged him for the password. He stated " I will only tell you the password if you pay me $30 in

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