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A 25 year-old woman named Teresa lived in Oregon. She unfortunately had to go through the worse Experience a woman could ever go through. Teresa had two kids. She had two daughters one named Maria and the other was named Sandra. Maria was only 1 year- old. Sandra was 2 years-old. Teresa was a single and working mom.

Teresa lives in a part of town that suffers from poverty. She works almost all day to supply and support her kids and their needs. Teresa would skip meals to buy clothes and food for her kids. Teresa's family was always distant. But one day all contact with them just stopped. They never bothered to call or visit. She had to leave her kids home alone while she worked because she didn't know anyone willing to take care of her kids. It never became a problem as her kids were used to it they knew to never open the door and they knew where snacks were kept.

It was a foggy yet sunny day. Teresa woke up and tried to make as little noise as possible in an attempt to get ready without waking her kids up. She succeeded and walked outside of her apartment door and locked it right behind her. She
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She started strolling back home. In her gut she felt something was off. She carefully made her way up the stairs and started unlocking her apartment door. She slowly opened it , the small living room and kitchen looked normal other than some trash. She then started walking to her room, she grabbed the knob and started twisting it open very slowly. She closed her eyes as she could feel something terrible was behind that door. The door was now fully open but her eyes were still shut. Once she opened them she instantly fell to her knees. In Front of her lay her two unconscious daughters with what looked like bullet wounds. She started balling her eyes out. She held their bodies while crying and asking why this happened. She sat their for hours until she knew she had to get their bodies to

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