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Personal Narrative Nate Smith, a person that completely changed my life on April 22, 2016. You might be thinking right now that this story doesn’t change my life because it’s a relationship, it does change my life, trust me. He made me feel like he cared about me and my choices. He made me think that anything was possible and he would never give up on me. He always put faith in me. I soon learned that he didn’t care about me, my decisions or us.
On September 1 is when I found out that he and my best friend were talking or liked each other and they did all of it behind my back. I remember sitting at lunch when I found out. I immediately started thinking “why did I do this, why did I like him so much, I shouldn’t have talked to him, I knew that was gonna happen.” I wanted
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I did end up getting caught for sneaking out, about 6 days after it happened. That is when my life had completely changed. When my parents found out it was pure hell for me. It was no phone, netflix, going anywhere for a month, and for a teenager like me, it was awful. We now have security cameras on my house and alarms on every window and doors. My parents can now only trust me home alone with my sister because they know I can’t do anything with her around me 24/7. I also wasn’t aloud to talk to him ever again. When I got my phone back I did talk to him and the only thing he had to say to me was “We are gonna have to end everything.” My heart broke. I thought maybe he would have felt bad for me, but no. More of a “bye I don’t wanna be a part of your drama” type thing. I’m still not allowed to stay home alone or go over to certain friends houses for a while. My parents still make fun of what I did and joke about it. I laugh when they joke about it but honestly I don’t think it’s funny. I seriously could have got hurt or in a lot more trouble than I

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