Personal Narrative Analysis

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A time I was focused on the past and future which lead me to miss out on an opportunity was when there was an assembly about graduation during my senior year of high school. During the assembly most of the time was in my mind. The thoughts that were in my mind consisted of the past and how it changed me in general. Also, I kept reminiscing about the moments with my sister from childhood to where we were and could not believe how we made it through a lot. However, my mind shifted to the future of what is yet to come such as college and how my friends were deciding to go to college out of state. Additionally, my mind kept focusing on the surreal thought of meeting the president to be able to shake his hand and hear his words in person. During

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