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When I got to high school it was basically the same thing. I stopped playing sports, though just because of too much drama and I was tired of it. I tried to maintain above a C average in all my classes and even got better at not being so shy, but I was still pretty shy. I was still pretty shy, but I think I will always be that way. I still didn’t have many friends but, the friends I did have, I’m grateful that I had them and that they were willing to be my friend. Other than that, I still really tried to keep to myself, I was more a person who was always alone then, a person who always had someone around.
Nothing bad had really ever happened to me, but that all changed on June 9th, 2014 I went out for what I thought was gonna be a normal swim but
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I told her what was going on and since my stepmom Kim is a nurse, she decided that there was something very wrong, so she got in the pool and helped me onto a raft to stable me. Kim then told my brother Justin to go get someone inside to call nine- one- one. As I waited for what I thought was forever, I started to get some feeling back and this was an amazing thing. Once the ambulance got there they lifted Me over the side of the pool and got me in the truck, by that time my dad was by my side and he rode with me to the hospital.
Once they got to the hospital, they took me straight into the x ray room and started that, and a CAT scan. After about 20- 25 minutes the doctors came in and told me that I had shattered many bones in my neck. By this time I was so in shock of what was all going on that I just started to cry and just couldn't stop, It was one of the worst things that has happened to me and it was so scary. Right then and there nurse started coming and putting Ivys in and fixing me up to put me back on the ambulance and take me to another hospital in

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