Personal Narrative: American Horror Story

I finally got around to watching the fifth season of American Horror Story. I was excited to see what they would be coming up with, seeing as this time it would take place in a hotel, possibilities galore, and with the little bits they released I was getting interested. When the show started I eagerly awaited what fate was in store for the first two victims, I mean women, yet as the show unfolded within the first five minutes, I found myself becoming disappointed with it. I stopped watching after about 31 mins. I couldn’t handle it anymore. I didn’t understand what was going on and why any of it was even relevant. It was too much sex and blood and none of it had a purpose. It felt as if it should have been a trailer for a movie and not an actually …show more content…
It was as if the writer and director wanted to just throw all the carnage they could at viewers. All I could think was I have watched a porno with a better storyline than this and I was actually invested in it. The turn off wasn't due to the graphic nature of the scenes either. I love horror movies I watch them all the time so seeing things of that nature doesn't bother me at all. It is expected, but without a decent storyline under all that carnage it just becomes a home video that could be shot in someone’s bedroom. I caught glimpses of thing here and there but it wasn’t enough to keep me interested. There were too many characters and so much going on it was just overwhelming. This episode could have definitely been stretched out into a good three episodes and moved more smoothly. The believability of the episode suffered immensely when a few minor tweaks would have made it tremendously better. I know it is fake but many people still like to watch it. Horror or anything for that matter doesn't have to be real for someone to believe …show more content…
The second would be highly unlikely and I give thanks only Robert Rodriquez’s The Misbehaviors from the movie Four Rooms. Four Rooms was a great movie and I would recommend it anyone, maybe the writer should have taken hints from those storyline to figure out how to string storyline together smoothly. The women could have checked the toilet found it clogged with bloody stool and proceeded to ask for another room. Whatever happens next, although it is unlikely, your brain would start telling you that maybe one hotel might contain a child that feasts on blood. There are people who do drink blood and this scenario would make more sense than a person being sown into a mattress. The maid cleaning blood off a mattress felt haunted house like whereas a maid putting bloody sheets into her cart bag and giving the woman a dirty look would have been more realistic and creepy, plus if the woman tried to get a glimpse of the dark room and saw something she wasn't sure was real or not would have worked better. I work as a Housekeeper so I have seen hundreds of guest peek into other rooms just to see if they are all similar or to see what it looked like. This would have been completely normal for me to see, as for maids with attitude, and bloody sheets. Be surprised how many bloody sheets we clean, not soaked of course, but still look