Personal Narrative: A Stab In The Heart

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A Stab in the Heart I was hurt. Thud, I feel to my knees, the pain was so intense, . It was as if I was stabbed by a knife. My heart tightened from the pain. It started to get blurry from the tears in my eyes. Getting back up was as hard to me as climbing Mount Everest. My legs started to wobble again and I knew they were going to give way. I hurried after the class to try to catch up but, I couldn’t. I need a pass to go to the nurse. I hurried to the teacher and tried to speak. The pain was too great and words couldn’t form. Then it started to get hard to breathe. “Take a deep breath” I tried to think to myself. I breathed in and out for one second, two seconds to calm myself down. That was all I could do at the time.

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