Personal Narrative: A Space Odyssey

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Well honestly, I don’t really know where to start. I’m not really even sure what the point of all this is. Well, I guess we could start at the attack? Yeah sounds good. Alright so, I’m not sure on the exact date but, it was somewhere just beyond the derious belt. Yes I think that sounds about right. At that time, I was a cadet in the G.F.C. I don’t know what it is about space, the vast openness, the overwhelming lights, or the freedom of flight; but it always gets to me. We made the trip to Gemini Station every month or so, but every single time it felt like the first. I remember I would look to left of my cockpit and see Juniper. The enormous size was almost overwhelming, but not quite so. The blue planet was beautiful, and very
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Now the idea here was to make it behind the asteroid before the missiles did, and cause the missiles to hit the asteroid instead of me. But of course that would only work if they didn’t have the new teslaNav systems, but it was better to take that chance then being blown to bits. I set the throttle to full ahead, putting every ounce of power my ship had into going forward. I noticed the ship to my left began to angle itself toward the asteroid as well. Maybe they had the same idea. The ship got closer to mine and I could see the pilot give me a distinct thumbs up. The missiles were seconds away from impact. I did my best to steer my attention away from the beeps and flashes of my panels and focus more on the task at hand. Just a few more seconds would do the trick. I can’t really explain the rest in much detail. All I remember is a boom. The loudest I’ve ever heard. So intense it shook my entire ship. My ship spun out of control. The beeping didn’t stop though. Two seconds, three seconds, and I still wasn’t dead. I managed to stabilize my course and took a look behind myself. What used to be an asteroid was more like a broken teacup. The ships pouring around it jarred me out of my daze.

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