Great job Jalaine! Your video kept my attention the whole time. I wanted to learn more about puppy mills and how to avoid them. You did a great job at being enthusiastic and I could tell you were passionate about this topic. Your eye contact with the audience and camera was great. Your visual aid was great! One thing I noticed that could be slightly distracting is the dog barking, walking, and panting in the background, however it did not bother me too much I thought it was actually quite fitting since you were talking about dogs. The only other thing I noticed is that once or twice you paused and looked past the camera as if something was distracting
