It was a warm summer day in Honolulu, Hawaii. "Are you coming Austin" said my brother Thomas "yeah be right there" I said, we were going to the beach for the day while my grandmother went to work. "Hurry" Thomas said "I got to get my shoes on" I said as I tied my shoe. When we aproached the beach I saw a lot of people so I knew it was going to be crowded at the hot dog stand. "Lets get in the water"Thomas said as we walked passed an old man that tersely said "don't go to far out the tide will snatch you up and take you away" "ok sure" I said sarcastically. So I got in the water and started to swim, but all of a sudden I feel that I am getting dragged back. "Help" I desperately yelled "HELP" but no one could hear, I was too far out I watched my brother in the water swimming not worried about me. As time changed from 1:00 to 2:00 to 3:00 I couldn't see the beach anymore, I couldn't see anything except for water
Suddenly I see an island "yes". So I started to swim toward it. "Ouch" something hit my leg "bump" it hit it again. So I look under water and I see a baby shark "uhoh" I said as I started to swim toward the island. As I was swimming I looked back and the shark was gone "yes" I said. When I was inland enough that I could touch the …show more content…
"Ahah" I found the perfect stick so I swam out to where the box was that I stepped on and tried to pry out of the sand "this thing ways a million pounds". I could finally get the box out of the sand a hundred years later, but it was locked so I dragged it up on the beach. Right then I hear a helicopter flying by "help downhere" I yelled. Then I see the helicopter come down to the island and land. "What are you doing here" the pilot said "I got caught up in the rip tide" I said "whats in that box"he said "I don't know", "well lets find out" the pilot said as he grabbed some metal cutters so he could cut the lock
Suddenly I see an island "yes". So I started to swim toward it. "Ouch" something hit my leg "bump" it hit it again. So I look under water and I see a baby shark "uhoh" I said as I started to swim toward the island. As I was swimming I looked back and the shark was gone "yes" I said. When I was inland enough that I could touch the …show more content…
"Ahah" I found the perfect stick so I swam out to where the box was that I stepped on and tried to pry out of the sand "this thing ways a million pounds". I could finally get the box out of the sand a hundred years later, but it was locked so I dragged it up on the beach. Right then I hear a helicopter flying by "help downhere" I yelled. Then I see the helicopter come down to the island and land. "What are you doing here" the pilot said "I got caught up in the rip tide" I said "whats in that box"he said "I don't know", "well lets find out" the pilot said as he grabbed some metal cutters so he could cut the lock