Personal Narrative: A Cinderella Sequel

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A Cinderella Sequel
Once upon a time on a nice warm, sunny day with the grass gently blowing in the breeze Cinderella and Prince Charming where pulling up to the light blue thousand year old castle. In there brand new gold and silver carriage with a peachy color, smooth ,silky silk cushions the most smooth and comfortable things ever.
Cinderella excitedly said, “LOOK we're here.”
Lady Radula was flying through the halls to the King’s room, shouting, “ They're HERE.”
“Lady Radula you will teach her to be a proper princess,” the King demanded.
“Yes your highness,” Lady Radula kindly gently said.
“Hello your highnesses I’m lady radula thing King is demanded that I teach you to be a proper princess,” she gently said
“What ?” Cinderella confusedly
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“All RIGHT! first things first no cooking!!!! NO cleaning AND NO ABSOLUTELY NO VILLAGERS in the castle ,” lady radula shouted and demanded.
“Yes mam,” Cinderella frighteningly said
“Okay time for your dress,” lady radula meanly said
“What's wrong with this one?”Cinderella wondered to herself
Lady radula put a huge steel bar base on Cinderella to go on the inside of her Nashe put an ugly plain pale of all pale dresses on her she pulled and pulled as tight as it went “there,” lady radula gladly said
Cinderella was only able to move a little at a time the dress was so tight, “ It's hard to breathe sorry but I do not like this,” Cinderella struggled to say as she was trying to breathe normal but it was to hard the dress was so tight.
“You will get used to it and will like it!” lady radula snapped
“Yes mam,” Cinderella kindly said
“NEXT!” Lady radula screamed as we went to balance.
I was trying to walk in high heels they were 10 inches high then she stood in front of me and I said to myself “I never realized how not pretty she was with all of her huge pussy warts all over her face. Her one tooth that was two times bigger than the rest and stuck out out her mouth when it was closed and all of her teeth were dark yellow. Her breath smelled like rotten

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