Passive Voice In College

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Every college student must know how to write. Writing is not that simple. A lot of mistakes are often overlooked and made. Such as, using the passive voice, using weak verbs, and not having a good variety of sentences. The most crucial thing to do during the writing process is to proofread.
Do not write in Passive voice. It is easy to slip into passive writing. Be aware of using: was, is being, has been, had been, will be, must be, and should have been. Passive voice is when the subject receives an action. For instance, "Your car as been damaged." Switch this to active voice when the subject does the action, "I damaged your car." Writing in passive voice is often unclear for the readers. Sentences need to be more concise and clear. To change

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