This essay talked about three things I included in my letter. These three things are my word choice, my sentences, and my use of perspective.
In Zero's letter I used broken up sent it to show how he is still learning grammar because he is the only one out of everyone who can't read, or write. In Mr. Pendenski's letter I used a lot of Western slang to show his Texan personality. Zero's letter used these words "I got every darn one of 'em right" (Kadam 1).
I used parallel structure to show how basic their life is and to show their routine. In camp Green Lake they keep doing the same thing over and over again. For example In Mr.pendanski's letter it said "y'all should also know that I was madder than a wet hen when I found out that you
In Zero's letter I used broken up sent it to show how he is still learning grammar because he is the only one out of everyone who can't read, or write. In Mr. Pendenski's letter I used a lot of Western slang to show his Texan personality. Zero's letter used these words "I got every darn one of 'em right" (Kadam 1).
I used parallel structure to show how basic their life is and to show their routine. In camp Green Lake they keep doing the same thing over and over again. For example In Mr.pendanski's letter it said "y'all should also know that I was madder than a wet hen when I found out that you