Panchito Gonzalez: A Short Story

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One fearful day Panchito Gonzalez was walking home alone down an empty sidewalk. He had just attended his son's funeral. All of the sudden he saw a guy walking behind him with a bat, he became frightened and started running. He looked behind him and the man was chasing him, then “boom Shakalaka” he hit his head on the pole of a light post. Panchito woke up in the middle of an abandoned asylum, he noticed the TV had turned on by itself. A doll named Jigsaw popped out and screamed “ Wanna play a game?” Jigsaw continued and said “you have five minutes to unlock the trap that's on your head and the only way to get the key is to use a scalpel and cut open your eyelid, reach in your eye socket and get the key. Good luck you have five minutes”. …show more content…
Panchito found himself in a room that had a hole that appear to lead to an underground tunnel. Panchito proceeded to go into the tunnel in hopes to escape. It was dark, cold, muddy and dirty. Crawling through the tunnel Panchito saw a light from a crack in the tunnel, Panchito threw his body toward where the crack was then he noticed that the tunnel he went under was part of the game and he noticed that he was stuck in another room but this time it wasn't just him Jeff the Killer was there too. A television in the room turned on and once again Jigsaw appeared and said “ Jeff after all the torturing and killing of children you have done you need to pay for your actions and the only way out jeff is by being helped by one of the victims parents you tortured. If the person refuses to help you'll be ripped in half. As for you Panchito if u decide to help him you need to solve a riddle on the machine and every time you mess up the machine will pull jeff's body further apart and further apart, you have 6 attempts to solve the riddle, Jeff's fates is in your hands.”

Panchito stares into the eyes of the killer who tortured his son to death,”why did you torture my son what did we ever do to you!?” Jeff stares back but no answer”you're gonna pay for what you did to my son and as revenge I will leave you here to die” Jeff stares back and yells ”you can't do this

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