Pablo Descriptive Writing

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Pablo
By: Rok Outside of the water there were kids playing on the beach while their maid drones supervised them. Oops! I forgot to introduce myself! I’m Pablo, Pablo Ferisa. You may not be able to tell this but I am a sea monster. But I’m not scary! I’m really nice! I just want to be the humans’ friends, but their maid drones just protect their children. I was swimming near the beach in the Florida Keys. I slowly surfaced. I swam by a piece of trash. These maid drones discard their trash the way humans eat, a lot! Now practically the whole world except for the beaches and national parks are covered in trash. The reason the beaches are not covered in trash is because the maid drones throw their trash in the water. It’s so disgusting! I poked my head above the water and a maid drone threw trash at me. Then I remembered I could do something about it. I decided to go turn on The Filter. The Filter is a giant machine in the middle of The Gulf of Mexico. It looks like an oil platform but it is 30 times bigger. The Filter cleans the oceans by sucking in all the trash in the water.

I dove under the water and I started swimming south. I swam very, very, quickly. I saw the tall legs of The Filter through the warm crystal clear water from a mile away. I climbed up an old, rusty ladder on one of the legs of The Filter. I popped my head above the surface. Water was sloshing all around me. I looked up at the towering
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