Owls: A Narrative Fiction

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“Come on, let’s go, let’s go, let’s go,” Naomi yelled excitedly to her friend Jayden.
“I really want to go on walk to see the stars!”
Jayden sluggishly walked down the steps of their new house and said yes. The two girls were off in a hurry.
Naomi and Jayden have never been around Screamer, Alabama before because they just moved there to have a fresh start. Anyone who has ever lived or passed through this town has said the people are nice, and it is also a very friendly, warm-felt community. So they decided to give it a try.
When they started out on their walk down Main Street, they noticed many buildings were old. It was a windy night, owls were howling, buildings were creaking, and shutters were flapping.
Jayden said “First off it is cold
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Jayden and Naomi screeched in horror because it looked like a huge shadow of a ghost.
Naomi says, “I think we should go check it out, what is the worst thing that can happen to us?”
Naomi the brave one, decided to start walking into the park. They went past the ticket booth first, which had a spider covered skeleton.
Jayden shouts, “OH MY GOODNESS GET OUT OF HERE!”
Jayden started sprinting away, but Naomi pulled her back and they kept on going. Next they went down a winding pathway that led them past the Ferris wheel. The Ferris wheel had seats hanging from one chain and bars not connected. The last thing they could see in the dark was the bumper cars. Every time they moved a step, music started playing, lights started flickering, and rides started moving. Then they started hearing laughing, creaking, hammering, and drilling noises. Jayden and Naomi were scared out of their mind, they started hollering as loud as they could. At that moment they did not know what to do. Running toward the entrance was not an option because, what just popped out of the ground, were teddy bears holding their chopped heads coming toward them with stuffing dragging behind
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When the girls were released from the net all the beasts stood closer than a foot away from them, with a stench of rotten milk. Because they were so fatigue, they did not have any defense. They could not think of any other way to defend, so they sat down on the ground, and hunched together and never looked up. Nothing happened. Jayden and Naomi thought it was all going to go away, but then unexpectedly all the monsters parted and two eerie, disturbing zombies walked toward the two girls with ragged clothes on and had blood that dripped from their body. Every second, which felt like an eternity, the zombies kept on coming closer and

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