Introduction
A. Got to capture the reader’s attention, try using a fact like “The three years after the great recession of 2008, 95% of America income went solely to the 1%”
B. Build the case through logic that over time we are seeing that the rich are reaching the heights of American prosperity not seen since the 1920’s and a few other facts or info like “The top 1% controls nearly 43% of the American wealth while the first four quintiles (80%) of Americans only own 7% of American wealth.”
C. Then use your topic sentence- Is it possible for the American working class to climb the social ladder when the majority of America's wealth is being funneled to already rich
II. With the new economy instead of creating new jobs or raising wages big companies are instead just collecting the money
Although the government is creating new jobs big companies are not hiring as much
The unemployed rates are up to nearly 5% which is a very large proportion of people.
Opposing View-That those who need those lower paying jobs are rather lazy and uninterested in work and would much rather lay on their backs and gather money from the government than spend the time needed to get a good education for good jobs. Walmart is not meant for a lifetime job, they need to spend their time to get a good