On the Of Mice And Men essay overall I received a 82%. which is a B. Although I could of done better this grade is very accurate. Mrs.Coverstone graded me well based on all the errors and slips I had during my essay.
On the ideas category I was rated basic and received a 33/45 which is a 73% a C. I believe I got this grade because I did had a strong, and clear idea. Although it lacked of focus on the controlling idea. Mrs. Coverstone gave me an accurate grade because I know I didn't have the brightest and most focused ideas.
On the organization category I got rated proficient and received a 21/25 which is a 84% a B. I received this grade because my body paragraphs showed some pattern of organization and sequence.