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Hi Roger! Hope you're doing very well. I've followed your career (which includes your campaigns & political beliefs) for some time now & to say the least, I'm a huge fan. I truly believe you put the constituents & our region first, which is crucial. Not sure if you follow the local Folsom political spectrum or my campaign for city council at all, but if you have, I was hoping to get an independent, outside & professional opinion on it. I'm running again this year & I'm looking for some objective critiquing, whether it be positive or negative. I'm very curious in what your viewpoint is on Folsom.

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