Bowman includes statements from multiple professionals from different national education centers, to help support her claim and provide a credible argument. While Yip also turned towards an outside source to provide more information, she did not venture out to more than one source. To prove that her argument is logical she includes a claim from Dr. Gibson-Davis pointing out the relevance of marriage in past centuries, when marriage was required for a woman to be financially secure as opposed to more recent years where a woman has the same opportunities that a man has. Yip compares the average income of traditional families to nontraditional families, but there are always outliers and families that are not taken into account. Pathos was presented in Bowman’s argument when she discussed other milestones being used as first steps into adulthood instead of marriage. Most young adults today can relate that they would rather establish a career, pay of student loans or other debts, or buy a house before they legally bond themselves to another person. She states that marriage is symbolic and while it is still respected it is not as necessary as it once was. Traditional families like marriage still hold reverence and while it is still the ideal situation for most americans it is not necessary to provide a loving environment, and a successful
Bowman includes statements from multiple professionals from different national education centers, to help support her claim and provide a credible argument. While Yip also turned towards an outside source to provide more information, she did not venture out to more than one source. To prove that her argument is logical she includes a claim from Dr. Gibson-Davis pointing out the relevance of marriage in past centuries, when marriage was required for a woman to be financially secure as opposed to more recent years where a woman has the same opportunities that a man has. Yip compares the average income of traditional families to nontraditional families, but there are always outliers and families that are not taken into account. Pathos was presented in Bowman’s argument when she discussed other milestones being used as first steps into adulthood instead of marriage. Most young adults today can relate that they would rather establish a career, pay of student loans or other debts, or buy a house before they legally bond themselves to another person. She states that marriage is symbolic and while it is still respected it is not as necessary as it once was. Traditional families like marriage still hold reverence and while it is still the ideal situation for most americans it is not necessary to provide a loving environment, and a successful