For Whitman, he utilizes careful diction, in that he incorporates a variety of words with negative connotations. An example would be the line, “I see, in low life, the mother misused by her children, dying, neglected, gaunt, desperate…” in that Whitman consecutively lines up four words that all relate to despair to describe such an event. With the inclusion of these vivid descriptions, the tone Whitman provides demonstrates to the reader that the speaker is conscious of the magnitude of the atrocities that surround him, but, as it is stated in the last line of Whitman’s poem, he reveals his own cowardice to the audience by writing, “I sitting, look out upon, see, hear, and am silent”. This leaves an implied sense of regret for his lack of action in the misdeeds he witnessed, which is emphasized through Whitman’s repetition of his use of verbs of complacency, such as “I see” or “I hear”. Niemöller’s tone is also through the use of repetition. The repeated line of “…and I did not speak out…” would then build up the emphasis of the very last line of Niemöller’s poem for, “…and there was no one left to speak for me” clearly portrays to the audience of the speaker’s regret for his lack of action now that the speaker’s safety was on the line. In short, the tones of both poems were of remorse and sadness, of which would then set the mood of their writing
For Whitman, he utilizes careful diction, in that he incorporates a variety of words with negative connotations. An example would be the line, “I see, in low life, the mother misused by her children, dying, neglected, gaunt, desperate…” in that Whitman consecutively lines up four words that all relate to despair to describe such an event. With the inclusion of these vivid descriptions, the tone Whitman provides demonstrates to the reader that the speaker is conscious of the magnitude of the atrocities that surround him, but, as it is stated in the last line of Whitman’s poem, he reveals his own cowardice to the audience by writing, “I sitting, look out upon, see, hear, and am silent”. This leaves an implied sense of regret for his lack of action in the misdeeds he witnessed, which is emphasized through Whitman’s repetition of his use of verbs of complacency, such as “I see” or “I hear”. Niemöller’s tone is also through the use of repetition. The repeated line of “…and I did not speak out…” would then build up the emphasis of the very last line of Niemöller’s poem for, “…and there was no one left to speak for me” clearly portrays to the audience of the speaker’s regret for his lack of action now that the speaker’s safety was on the line. In short, the tones of both poems were of remorse and sadness, of which would then set the mood of their writing