I hope you are having a great spring break!
I would like to rewrite my essay so that I can get a better grade, and I have been thinking about a new question and thesis to base my essay on. I was wondering if you could help by guiding me in picking the best question and thesis to write my new essay.
Instead of answering the question “Why does Wintermute need a team to successfully merge with Neuromancer?”, I was thinking of changing my question to “Who are the top three characters that are essential in completing the mission for Wintermute to successfully merge with Neuromancer?”. My thesis would be, “Case, Molly and the Finn are the top three characters that are essential in completing the mission for Wintermute to successfully