Introduction
This should be general or background information about the topic of your essay. The format it should follow: This can be in point form for the outline.
Hook: This can be a worldly statement, a quotation or a general phrase. Avoid clichés.
“Negligence is the rust of the soul that corrodes through all her best resolves.” This quote by Owen Felltham means that negligence can ruin everything in your life including relationship, and health.
Context and transition: This is where you will connect your hook to your actually topic. Remember to remain general, but give your topic some context.
Sarah Moorcroft is struggling to find who her real daughter is, which causes further harm to the family and their relationship unknowingly. This …show more content…
“Those dreams, they haunt me every night.” (Tremayne 125)
Analysis: Analyze the significance of the quote and how it supports your point.
Sarah is still depressed about losing a daughter which affects her in negative way, causing her to take pills, and react violently. Her depression causes her to have nightmares that give her a hard time. The nightmares she usually gets are about her past when she cheated on Angus. Ignoring those nightmares show neglect and her past follows up to her she is unable to stop the depression. Proof 2: Evidence of facts to prove the topic sentence (remember in the good copy you must provide a context to introduce the quote beforehand).
“Lydia was in the window upstairs too and I couldn’t stop her, every time I looked she was there, every time, and she’s dead and she’s in the mirror at home…” (Tremayne 152 – 153).
Analysis: Analyze the significance of the quote and how it supports your …show more content…
Tremayne was a suspenseful and full of agony which creates the book be very interesting. Sarah losing her daughter strikes her hard. She neglected her daughter and that is how she lost one of the twins. Neglect can cause physiological problems, disruption of relationship and death. A year after one of their identical twin daughters, Lydia, dies in an accident, Angus and Sarah Moorcroft move to the tiny Scottish island Angus inherited from his grandmother, hoping to put together the pieces of their shattered lives. The problems they have can be fixed if they had not neglected anything and did not separate there
This should be general or background information about the topic of your essay. The format it should follow: This can be in point form for the outline.
Hook: This can be a worldly statement, a quotation or a general phrase. Avoid clichés.
“Negligence is the rust of the soul that corrodes through all her best resolves.” This quote by Owen Felltham means that negligence can ruin everything in your life including relationship, and health.
Context and transition: This is where you will connect your hook to your actually topic. Remember to remain general, but give your topic some context.
Sarah Moorcroft is struggling to find who her real daughter is, which causes further harm to the family and their relationship unknowingly. This …show more content…
“Those dreams, they haunt me every night.” (Tremayne 125)
Analysis: Analyze the significance of the quote and how it supports your point.
Sarah is still depressed about losing a daughter which affects her in negative way, causing her to take pills, and react violently. Her depression causes her to have nightmares that give her a hard time. The nightmares she usually gets are about her past when she cheated on Angus. Ignoring those nightmares show neglect and her past follows up to her she is unable to stop the depression. Proof 2: Evidence of facts to prove the topic sentence (remember in the good copy you must provide a context to introduce the quote beforehand).
“Lydia was in the window upstairs too and I couldn’t stop her, every time I looked she was there, every time, and she’s dead and she’s in the mirror at home…” (Tremayne 152 – 153).
Analysis: Analyze the significance of the quote and how it supports your …show more content…
Tremayne was a suspenseful and full of agony which creates the book be very interesting. Sarah losing her daughter strikes her hard. She neglected her daughter and that is how she lost one of the twins. Neglect can cause physiological problems, disruption of relationship and death. A year after one of their identical twin daughters, Lydia, dies in an accident, Angus and Sarah Moorcroft move to the tiny Scottish island Angus inherited from his grandmother, hoping to put together the pieces of their shattered lives. The problems they have can be fixed if they had not neglected anything and did not separate there