Negative Influence Spots In Children Research Paper

This essay was about the negative influence spots have in children. Recently, their have been a lot of studies on this topic. They will go back and forth arguing and stereotyping children. They all believe it must me one way of the other. The writer of this piece seems to follow the same path, until you reach the end of the piece. The thesis of this paper is, “when overzealous parents and coaches impose adult standards on children's sports, the result can be activities that are neither satisfying nor beneficial to children”. This quote is in the introduction paragraph of this paper. It is right after a quotation from a credible source. This placement works well, by providing readers with the stance the writer has taken. The thesis can be …show more content…
We will now pick apart each main point and why they work. The first is the dangerous hazards children face, while playing these sports. Children's bodies are always growing and violent injuries involved in sport competing can lead to long term injuries that could impact the child for the rest of their life. This was the weakest point in the paper, due to the fact that children can get hurt by doing the simplest of things. A lot of times children are clumsy for quite a while and are always getting hurt. The next is, it can negatively impact a child's mental development. It went to example that if children are forced to participate now, they may end up hating playing in they future. I thought this was a strong point, due to the fact, that this happens in everyday adult situations also. The final example, sports being highly exclusive, it the most important point of the paper. Even at a young age children are being pushed to their limits. Take wrestling for an example, they are cutting weight at young ages, which is very unhealthy. These points then led into the other sides