This poem is very interesting I have never read it before, I truly love it and if this is what a little black girl truly went through I am forever sorry. This is very sad and if I lived in this historical period to see this, I would be shot with my mouth and attitude. Considering I do not believe in God put anyone on this earth to live like this. Now, on with your poem, your explanation does flow smoothly with your evidence so it does not need you to explain much more detail about it. I know I am not one to analyze anyone’s paper trust me, I need help myself, but I am not sure about your thesis. If this is your introduction and your thesis, and your thesis should be that of the last sentence or two; is it based on
This poem is very interesting I have never read it before, I truly love it and if this is what a little black girl truly went through I am forever sorry. This is very sad and if I lived in this historical period to see this, I would be shot with my mouth and attitude. Considering I do not believe in God put anyone on this earth to live like this. Now, on with your poem, your explanation does flow smoothly with your evidence so it does not need you to explain much more detail about it. I know I am not one to analyze anyone’s paper trust me, I need help myself, but I am not sure about your thesis. If this is your introduction and your thesis, and your thesis should be that of the last sentence or two; is it based on