“This in itself was enough to damp the ardor of my enthusiasm.” This line really breaks out the loneliness and fear. Douglas’ enthusiasm has been depleted once he realizes that he could one day be thrown back into slavery. Douglas helps the reader feel like they too have seized upon like a “hideous crocodile seizes upon his prey.” Douglas uses a repeated dash at the end of the passage indicating that the hardships will never end for him. The dashes show an ongoing hardship that feeds his fear and worry so that they will grow into emotions that cannot be tamed. “without home or friends – without money or credit - wanting shelter and no one to give it - wanting bread, and no money to buy it…” Douglas aids the reader in understanding the emotional train wreck that can take place even if the reader has never been an escaped slave. He conveys his state of mind through the introduction and creation of prominent metaphors and syntax. He harnesses the power of these rhetorical devices to help people understand what it felt like to be free and then realize that the burdens have only
“This in itself was enough to damp the ardor of my enthusiasm.” This line really breaks out the loneliness and fear. Douglas’ enthusiasm has been depleted once he realizes that he could one day be thrown back into slavery. Douglas helps the reader feel like they too have seized upon like a “hideous crocodile seizes upon his prey.” Douglas uses a repeated dash at the end of the passage indicating that the hardships will never end for him. The dashes show an ongoing hardship that feeds his fear and worry so that they will grow into emotions that cannot be tamed. “without home or friends – without money or credit - wanting shelter and no one to give it - wanting bread, and no money to buy it…” Douglas aids the reader in understanding the emotional train wreck that can take place even if the reader has never been an escaped slave. He conveys his state of mind through the introduction and creation of prominent metaphors and syntax. He harnesses the power of these rhetorical devices to help people understand what it felt like to be free and then realize that the burdens have only