With this in mind, when it comes to school is an atmosphere we find ourselves doing the same routines but we also learn new ways to deal with certain situations. For instance, in my experience when it came to writing my persuasive composition that included the article "The New Renaissance," by Daniel Quinn, who theorized that something extraordinary is coming in a few decades from now and it could be a new Renaissance. Henceforth it was an eye opening in how he portrayed his …show more content…
Meanwhile at the same time, ever since I could remember formatting or even organizing were always a struggle in spite of having so many ideas that I couldn’t draw out into an introduction. Consequently, when it came to the rough version of my composition, everything was scattered and incoherent because my ideas were merging with other essay prompts. Although this may be true when it came to peer reviews my partner at the time gave me some quick pointers in how to better improve my composition. For example, since in stylizing my composition in an APA format was still an issue my partner gave me proper pointers in how to cite my quotes and reference them in the paragraph. In addition my acquaintance feedbacks on my composition it was a long list of grammar, punctuation, run on sentences, and sentences that don’t make sense. Eventually my writing style in compositions improved ever so slightly after every writing