Narrative Essay: The Frighting Moment

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The Frightening Moment
It was summer break. I woke up at 9 a.m. on Tuesday, then I woke my sister up, My sister is 5’6 in tall, has long black hair and black eyes, and is plump and chubby. My sister and I went to the kitchen to make some breakfast. I made some tea, and my sister made some French toast. After having breakfast, we went to get dressed, and I picked up a light blue shirt and black pants. My parents own two gas stations, so after getting dressed we went to one of our gas stations with my aunt to help her with some cleaning. My aunt is 5’4” tall, chubby, and healthy. She has long black hair and brown eyes. The drive to the gas station was only ten minutes from our house.When we arrived there, my aunt opened the store. It was hot
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It was almost 12 p.m., and we were done cleaning the store. It was now time for us to relax and have lunch, so we sat down and eat some cheeseburgers with french fries, and they were crunchy from the outside, light and fluffy from the inside. After having a delicious lunch, we were on our phones, and my aunt was on the cash register checking the customers. After every customer left, my aunt’s friend came to visit her at the store. While my aunt was talking with her friend, we heard some gunshots coming from the backside of the store. They sounded like fireworks. We thought it was some random noise until we heard some more gunshots. Then we realized it wasn’t just any sound; it was the sound of the gunshots. We were very scared. It was a very frightening moment.
A few moments later, a navy blue car stopped by our store. A middle-aged lady with short blond hair ran into the store. She wore black and white striped pants and was very scared and worried.
As she entered the store, she started shouting, “Help! Help! Call 911! My husband just got
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And the lady who got shot was sitting in the black car outside the store. She was shot in her stomach. And she was covered with blood. The lady who came inside the store was her sister, and she was worried and very nervous. A few minutes later, one ambulance and four police car arrived. Emergency medical technicians put the women on the stretcher and get her in the ambulance. Police started investigating again, and they were asking people if they saw anything. The lady’s sister told us that they had been driving when a white van stopped their car, and the people in the van started asking them about an address. Then they robbed them and started shooting at

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