Emily Espinosa
Mr. Shin
ELA8H
10 Oct. 2017 The Mysterious Loss
Bang! That was the sound of something hitting on the window. Bang! The sound was once again heard by Eliza that was now awake and was wondering what was making that atrocious sound. She slowly got up and carefully walked towards the window. While looking out, (she doesn't notice a shadow lurking into her bedroom.) With the thought that someone was awake this late and was making noises outside, she goes back to bed and slowly falls asleep. Eventually, she is awoken to another bang, and creepy whispers coming from downstairs. It took a moment before her eyes fully adjusted to the bright moonlight coming from outside the blinds and saw …show more content…
She was
about 25, when she first received an writing assignment. Now, she was 27 years old.
What she wasn't expecting was that she had to write about the 726 people that went
missing years ago. Eliza walked into her boss’s office with a wide smile and received
her assignment. Her boss giving her a worry glance but looking down right away before
she could look at him. Edward Ramirez, the creator of a powerful writing
company,with jet black hair and hazel eyes, cared for each one of his employees.
Once Eliza was out of the office, she slowly read it, several times. Her eyes scanning
the document faster than she has ever read. By the time Eliza was done reading, …show more content…
Eliza let out a shriek and fell to the floor. She picked herself up
and looked around the room. Due to the darkness of the room, she couldn't see a single
thing. When Eliza turned back around, the demon was in his natural form. He looked
about 6'7 feet tall, sharp fangs peeking from his mouth, and horns were now placed on
his head. His skin was much more paler than the last time Eliza saw him. The demon
bared his fangs at her and she took three large steps back. Once again she turned
around, however, this time she saw that the room now had light and bodies were
hanging from the ceiling. What Eliza didn't expect was the earsplitting bang
heard behind her. She turned around slowly and realized that she was hit, but reacted
to late.She felt the whole room spinning around, until she fell into a deep slumber.
Two weeks had passed and there was still no response of Eliza moving. The
demon sat patiently in his chair next to the chimney waiting for a response from Eliza to
happen. The burning wood hissed and crackled loudly. All of a sudden, Eliza woke
up with a slight gasp escaping her mouth. Her eyes landing on the demon faster than
a thunderbolt, waiting for him to make a move. When she knew he wasn't going
Mr. Shin
ELA8H
10 Oct. 2017 The Mysterious Loss
Bang! That was the sound of something hitting on the window. Bang! The sound was once again heard by Eliza that was now awake and was wondering what was making that atrocious sound. She slowly got up and carefully walked towards the window. While looking out, (she doesn't notice a shadow lurking into her bedroom.) With the thought that someone was awake this late and was making noises outside, she goes back to bed and slowly falls asleep. Eventually, she is awoken to another bang, and creepy whispers coming from downstairs. It took a moment before her eyes fully adjusted to the bright moonlight coming from outside the blinds and saw …show more content…
She was
about 25, when she first received an writing assignment. Now, she was 27 years old.
What she wasn't expecting was that she had to write about the 726 people that went
missing years ago. Eliza walked into her boss’s office with a wide smile and received
her assignment. Her boss giving her a worry glance but looking down right away before
she could look at him. Edward Ramirez, the creator of a powerful writing
company,with jet black hair and hazel eyes, cared for each one of his employees.
Once Eliza was out of the office, she slowly read it, several times. Her eyes scanning
the document faster than she has ever read. By the time Eliza was done reading, …show more content…
Eliza let out a shriek and fell to the floor. She picked herself up
and looked around the room. Due to the darkness of the room, she couldn't see a single
thing. When Eliza turned back around, the demon was in his natural form. He looked
about 6'7 feet tall, sharp fangs peeking from his mouth, and horns were now placed on
his head. His skin was much more paler than the last time Eliza saw him. The demon
bared his fangs at her and she took three large steps back. Once again she turned
around, however, this time she saw that the room now had light and bodies were
hanging from the ceiling. What Eliza didn't expect was the earsplitting bang
heard behind her. She turned around slowly and realized that she was hit, but reacted
to late.She felt the whole room spinning around, until she fell into a deep slumber.
Two weeks had passed and there was still no response of Eliza moving. The
demon sat patiently in his chair next to the chimney waiting for a response from Eliza to
happen. The burning wood hissed and crackled loudly. All of a sudden, Eliza woke
up with a slight gasp escaping her mouth. Her eyes landing on the demon faster than
a thunderbolt, waiting for him to make a move. When she knew he wasn't going