Creative Writing On A Drop Slide

The drop slide By: Maggie

Emma and I were walking up the stairs to get to the water slide we wanted to ride on at Zehnders. Zehnders was very big. It had an inside part of it with a bunch of baby slides, and an outside part that was very tall and was covered in kind of clear glass, and had all of the fun rides, and the drop slide was at the very top of it. The slide went super fast, it dropped you straight down about 20 feet. The ride was so tall you had to walk up like 57 flights of stairs, it was very tiring and I would have to catch my breath every time I was about to go on the ride. Every time that I took a step, I got more and more nervous about going on the slide. We were next in line to go. She was making me go first because I have …show more content…
It felt like I just fell down inside of a hollow 20 foot tree, except it was smooth and didn’t hurt at all when I reached the bottom of the part where it drops you. I was going so fast. The slide had a lot of twists and turns, but it was only 6 seconds long. It went really fast, so fast the fun didn’t last long enough. When I reached the end, a bunch of water splashed in my face. I opened my eyes to Emma waiting for me at the bottom. It definitely wasn’t as bad as I thought it would be. I thought. it was so fun that I ran up the stairs as fast as I could to do it again. I ended up doing it over and over again. It was seriously the most fun ride that I have ever been on. I was still scared to do it at first even though I have already done it before. Emma still didn’t go on it though, she was too scared. She missed out on a lot of fun for not going on the drop slide. The drop slide was just as fun as I remember it being. Out of all of the 11 birthdays I’ve had, this was definitely the best and most fun birthday so far. Now I know that things aren’t always as bad as they